A bad flash
Man you came so close to making a cool flash! YOU NEED SOUND/MUSIC!!! You could survive without a voice-over, but NEEED SOUND!!!!! Seriously, not a bad story (xept the ending sucked). Animation and graphics were pretty good. Oh yea, did I mention you need sound and/or music? Good luck on your next one.
happy ending? NOT IN AMERICA!
Well im just glad you ended without the ak-47 or the suicide by cops. Try voices and sound next time,loser!
sound would have been better
this cartoon would be better WITH sound
A decent start
Not bad, but it could use some polishing. Sound for one. You have the lip synching, so add some sound for it to synch to. And at various parts, the movie isn't cropped properly so you see floating black boxes at the top and bottom (you should really watch the movie before/after you submit it). And what's the deal with the green skintones?
All in all, shows potential. Keep practicing and you might be able to produce some pretty good stuff. Good luck.
Didnt even finish...
The lack of sound really dissapointed me. I didn't even finish watching it. Sorry dude, if you would have added the sound I might have watched it all and thus given you a better score! Better luck next time dude.