holy fuck
Jesus that was some GOOD animating, such wasted potentual!!!! Add more to it... and there isnt really much advice i can give you about the animation pace, or speed. I think you know it all. But serously, stick in a storyline and make it longer, this could make 1st page. And i will be happy to say "i reviewed what this was based on while it was under protection" not only that, but i voted 5 on it. Top quality, you lose 1 mark for annoying length but good god that rocked!