Strange
At first glance, the graphic let the animation down. But at the end, I cant help thinking what will happen to him. I think this deserves a place on NG, it should stay on. Your on my favourite authors, just so i can check when you make a sequel. I cant wait. Dont listen to other people. Youve told an interesting story, to bad about the graphics though. If ya want, ill draw some people and stuff for you, aslong as you let me find out what happens!
Good luck and god speed in making a sequel.