it was....ok
grammar, and some of the words were hard to read, but good
it was....ok
grammar, and some of the words were hard to read, but good
neat
it was pretty kool, the sprites i liked alot, grammer could have been better, some backgrounds were familiar, but overall its a pretty good flash.
Could have been better.
needs some work. Not bad though...but none the less, A little bit more effort would suffice, just a little.
Great, but very short.
I liked it. If you make the next one longer, your good. Liked the pok'emon joke, why was soni such a loser/wimp? Overall, it was funny.
You're right.
You're right: It is too short. I also didn't like the story. At least make a part two. It might increase my respect for you for coming up with the idea.