Very nice stuff! However...
Very nice but there is one thing bothering me about this flash... the grammar! Here is the spelling for some things you might add in other Naruto flash. Genin-low class ninja. Chuunin- squad commander of genin missions. Sometimes accompanied by Jounin. Jounin- High class ninjas who carry out "S" rank missions. Hokage- The strongest ninja in each village. Rasengan- An attack where you accumalate chakra in your hands to form a ball. Can only be used by Jiraiya-sama, 4th Hokage-sama, and Naruto-kun. Chidori- a jutsu which you gather chakra in your hands and spread it out as lightning. Kakashi-sensei and Sasuke-kun can use this jutsu. Kage Bunshin no jutsu- cloning technique which you create real bodies instead of fakes. Kuchiyose no jutsu- Summoning technique. Can summon frogs, snakes, snails etc. Cursed Seal- A cursed seal Orochimaru grants his subordinates. Can transfrom the user great power and alter their physical appearance. Kyuubi- the Nine Tailed Fox Demon that attacked Konoha years ago. Kyuubi was sealed in Naruto's body. Because of this the villagers of Konoha despise Naruto. Naruto is able to call upon the power of Kyuubi under extreme anger such as when Haku supposedly killed Sasuke.
I hope you found this stuff helpful, and I hope you add it in some other Naruto flash!!!