Reviews for The Sleep Sheep

[zeno-1982]

nice story

Nicely done. The graphics fit the theme of the piece very well.

You had a couple of misspelled words that I noticed: "catastrophe" and ... drat, I don't remember for certain ... it was something like "clumsyness" instead of "clumsiness."

I wanted a narrator at the beginning. Then, somewhere during the training scene, Donovan started doing the narration in the style of the spoken part of "Hail Atlantis" in my head, and I was glad you didn't have one, because it couldn't have been better than that was.

Madelief responds:

I'm Dutch... so I kinda make those mistakes every now and then ^_^
But thanks! I'll correct them.

And a narrator would be awesome....but I have a horrible voice and no microphone ^^;

Thank you very much for your review!

[CaptainPotato]

If I had kids

I'd tell them that story. Great work!

Madelief responds:

Whoa, thank you so much!

[Forest-Elf]

That was adorable!

Though I must admit, it does seem to be racist at first. You do a very nice job of correcting this by the end, however, so well done!

Madelief responds:

yeah.. I was afraid of being racist....but I didn't have any intentions of that kind...maybe I should make the sheep blue or somethiing? O_o

[MrBigStick]

heh. cute.

that was a simply adorable flash that put me in the mood for a quick nap. if that was your intention, it worked. goodnight!

Madelief responds:

Thank you so much!!
Now you can play this everytime you need a nap ;)