For what it is
No problem with it being short...its just a quick pun. The pun though wasn't worth more than a crack of a smile and there wasn't any sound. You did your own animating though, so i'll give enough points to protect the entry.
Reviews for "Red Bull"
Renegade-Hamster responds:
Do you get what a pun is?
It means I AM THE GREATEST!
It's alright
Now you need to use colour and sound; emphasis on the need for sound.
Renegade-Hamster responds:
This was done in the style of the Red Bull commercials, with barely any colour (I only coloured the can).
The sound...well, I got lazy! Plus, I don't think it needs it.
needs music
Ah damn, as I finished the cartoon, a Red Bull commercial came on. Something about rat poison given to this guy's mother who flies away. I think a musical track might enhance this cartoon. Good graphics, fits with the original graphics.
Renegade-Hamster responds:
Thanks!
It might have been better with some music, but I really couldn't be bothered. Where I am, it's 2.38 am and I did this in two hours.
Bad way to tell a good joke
I thought the idea was fairly humorous, but it was pulled off badly. When you make a short flash like that, you should make sure the animation is good, or people will overlook the joke because they disliked the animation. Color would be nice next time.
Renegade-Hamster responds:
If you're going to criticize my animation, please point out what is wrong with it, eg, low frame rate, not enough inbetween drawings, etc.
There is no colour except for the Red Bull can because that is the style of the ad.
Hehehe
I laughed.
Needs sound though.
Renegade-Hamster responds:
I agree.