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Erm... it just doesn't seem front page material... but it's better than anything I could have ever done, and it's better than some of the things that have made front page...
Still, I'm giving an honest score. There was no message worth conveying... the art was not at its full potential... and it really was 30 seconds... or less. Also, it seemed absolutely random and pointlessly violent which some may laugh at, but I found no subtlety to it at all.
I suppose a bit of... dialogue or establishing titles or ANYTHING might have helped to get across anything you wanted to say. If you wanted to submit a flash that was basically pointless and random and get a quick chuckle, I do not believe the front page is where it belongs. If you do decide to make another flash sometime in the future, which may be longer, you could link this scene to it, and I'm sure there would be much better responses.
Thank you for your time... ^_^;;