Reviews for Angel Asylum Teaser

[Itten]

Could use alot of work...

Definately a rip between worms and angel asylum. Please include more detail in your comments, or at least somehow admit it.
If you're doing something unique with a series(or two) and whatnot, it's good to admit it. That way chances are you won't be labelled as 'unoriginal' as well as burned by some people.

By the way, here's a quite gander at the local online dictionary/thesaurus:
Main Entry: asylum
Definition: refuge
Synonyms: cover, den, harbor, haven, hideaway, hideout, hole, ivory tower, port, preserve, refuge, retreat, safe house, safety, sanctuary, security, shelter

Find a word in the synonyms that I mentioned before in the first sentence? Makes me suspect your motives furthor.

ideal-drug responds:

lol yes, the idea was originaly from Angel Sanctuary.

I don't plan on ripping it off, I wanted to see what I could do if I took the start and ripped it out of the story line in my own way. So just have the same begining and the rest completly different. Ever seen those poem contests where they give you a begining like "I love summer because..." and you write in the rest of your poem? Kind of like that. Angel Sanctuary was just an amazing manga that I read and I really wanted to create something simular.

And worms... Umm not sure, playing too much worms 3d lmao and it's the first thing that came to mind.