Okay...
Okay, I would like to say that you are making yourself into a bit of a hypocrite. You are saying actually make your own stuff and yet, you have used sprites. I would not say this if you hadn't of had FF and MM sprites running around like idiots. And another thing, I may have rated high on Sprite Flash, but that is because those individuals actually made an attempt to do something different with the sprites, or make a tribute to a game(s) they like alot. So don't criticize because they thought "I should let people know of my joke on a video game in Flash form" because they did something simple.
As for your Flash. I admit the art at the beginning is great and the Humor at the end was decent, but you did a bad job with the sound. And don't go saying, "you don't animate, so you don't know" cause I do. I am just on a bit of a break and had nothing worth submitting. So before you criticize, think and analyze. I am now gonna watch your other Flash and give my two cents there.