It wasn't good... at all...
I hate to break it to ya, but it's not good. The art was pretty crappy, you traced a couple things, I could tell, and the animation just plain sucked. The warscene wasn't good at all, and you basically had the sounds consisting of:
Annoyingly repeated shooting noises (I know that's how they are in starcraft, but they didn't get on my nerves for some reason).
Dying sounds.
And that's about it. The music didn't really fit what was happening (I know it's from Starcraft, but that doesn't mean it'll fit ANYWHERE in a Starcraft movie).
Also, please, use originality. Make your own story, don't make one about Starcraft.
Keep trying.