it was pretty funny
I did not like the ending but you can fix that
I like't the part were sora is holding the key blade thing I also like the fighting part anyway good job
Reviews for "A Role Playing Game Chp1"
the-flashmaker responds:
Umm... I could have probably executed that a bit better. It was supposed to be a Ringu joke... Glad you liked it though!
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Ok
Not bad flash, take out the clicks and make it auto so speech comes up on its own, and work on the storyline... it's not the worst i've seen though
the-flashmaker responds:
Again, I will take out the clicks and have subtitles. Apologies, the script was kind of mental for it, so it kind of went off track. Next time I will have a script though! I swear! Good thing for me this isn't the worst thing you've seen.
Cool
Nice flash. Somehow I doubt he was the "chosen one". Just something tells me that.
the-flashmaker responds:
Uh... Yeah, actually. Later on there was supposed to be a girl who also has a little pompadour spiral (now, without the spiral, the redisign of Kalia). The priest gives her a replacement Tea kettle for the bucket, so Yargg thinks that she's an imposter trying to steal his fame. But I've written that out for the new version.
sucked
that really wasn't good, the fact you had to keep clicking buttons to advance the text, even when is was invisible, really dragged the story down. Having characters that don't give a shit are to cliche, and aren't that funny anyway. You could have added some voicework, or some non-looping music. All the jokes were predictable, the only one i actually thought very funny was volume XXX/30, also, how can the story go on if the main character dies at the end? Make the fights interactive and it might be fun to watch.
the-flashmaker responds:
SORRY! I'm sorry! I'll remove the buttons for the next one. That'll also enable music directly on the timeline(which should help, I hope). I didn't think anyone would want to do voiceovers so I didn't try, but I will. I don't know if I'll make the fights more interactive but I'll try (trying not to make this an actual game). The fights will have more (and better) moves. I never saw my jokes as predictable (your probably right) but I'll put more effort into them. I'm glad you enjoyed a bit of it!