very good for your first.
if you improove on your drawing REmake this cause it is a great idea for a story!!!
Reviews for "The Red Faction"
MarsYam responds:
some say the story sucks, some say it's very good. I think i gonna leave it. R.I.P you know :)
Because I'm starting with a new project.
Not bad.
Some of the stuff could have been worked on, like the graphics, but I thought the music was absolutely perfect for the type of mood you were trying to convey.
One thing that bugged me were a few typos, but that's about it.
Not bad for a first entry.
MarsYam responds:
you like the graphics...you're the first one :)
and srry for the typos, but i do my best, but my english is not very good.
Thx!
My Opinion is:
for the first entry okay
but everything can be aproved
and europes is not a nation hehe :>
frusted
MarsYam responds:
it can be in the year 2026 :)
Thx for the review!
Sad sad sad
Based on the overall animation (and the fact that you are a fist time animator) this wasn’t bad, but a few things lead this to be a total mockery.
1. The ending/dramatic audio was horrible, abrupt and bizarre; such self-conscious a conclusion in no way fits your five seconds of actual content.
2. Next time, less pretext, more text.
3. Europe is not a 'nation'.
If these three points were avoided (or rather replaced by there opposites) this would have received a 5/10 from me.
MarsYam responds:
hehehe thx for the tips! and i can be a nation in the year 2026, it's possible :)
Not bad
You're the saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal!
As always,glad I could help someone who actually put effort into their work pass judgement.
Zer0_exy
F-KREW Leader
MarsYam responds:
hehehe i like you ^^