Needs Improvement
Ok...for starters, some of the things Pie recieved from the "elements" made no sense at all....feet from the Sun?!? I like the idea of recieving powers from objects, though...think of a better way of applying that. The sound quality was ok, but could be a lot better. A low mark for this one, but with some work, the next submission could score higher.
Thank you. That was very helpful. When I begin storyboarding for vs. 2 I will keep what you said in mind. You putting it into perspective like that did get the wheels turning.
That was gay!
What the F**k was that, that was well gay.
I pitty you for releasing your homophobia and afinity for swearing through your criticism. It shows that you have deep seeded fears and resentments. Or maybe that you're simply unneducated. While I appreciate your honesty concerning my artwork, the way that you delivered it proves that our teachers and parents are not doing their jobs to avoid creating people like you.