Good Start, Needs work
The begining of this flash was awesome, had great art work, and cut scenes were good. I felt it didn't live up to the begining however, the scene at the bar lasted too long, and the characters didn't do anything.
You've got the skills, put them to some use!
Keep improving...
I think I was able to see through the guy, and see two other characters walk by. I'm not sure if it is intentional. If it is, don't do it. It looks daft. The audio is a little screwy y'know? Turning up the volume for the voice acting (which wasn't too bad) isn't a good sign. There was no lip syncing. Not enough activity in the bar scene. All you see is two people with their backs to the audience. If you made them move their heads or something, that would be cool. If they had facial expression like moving eyebrows, moving eyes, lips, mouths, hell your halfway there.
Keep improving...
P.S You spelt Prologue wrong...and I may have too... : P
dude...
please...the old man scene really ruined the movie, take it out! the rest was gd tho.
WTF
What happend it opend up so promessing, then u cut to some guys just sitting there talking!!! Do something for the biggining thing.
Hi and lol yes i know its boring, but this is just the prolouge, im working on the 1st episode and it will have gunfioghts, some punches thrown kicking, and a hell lot of swearing lol
erm...
teh voyss acteeng woz two qiyet. plass itt lukd leik sumthink gud woz hapning aht teh staart, bat itt jast whent too to giys torking.