Getting there.
I REALLY, REALLY thought that the art was CUTE. It's awesome. I know it's still a Beta, but just wanted you to know, put in good music, an interesting plot in which the game would revolve around in, some good dialog, more awesome characters, and better jobs. I think that you just have to do some more tweaking and you're done. Really cool, I say. Keep at it! I LOVE YOUR ART. :3