A few things...
To make this more impactful, ya might wanna add a couple things. First, don't make it a loop. Second, make it longe. Third, you spelled forful wrong XD. The art was really good though.
Reviews for "Why War?"
Insiteful
This is good, very good even. The lack of sound gives it a moment of honor and reverance. The monochome is fitting in that war is often looked at in black and white points of view yet it has so many shades of grey. The author is either very insiteful or has found someone's insitefule quote. In either case, this is good, very good.
ok...
It was a nice flash, but not top of the line, the English was just plain bad, and war is sometimes necessary. The type of helmet you used look very much like a Nazi Germany helmet of WWII. War, at that time, was absolutely necessary to preserve the foundations of the World we live in today. I didn't like the way you had new life spring out of death, as birds are not equal to humans. Loops are never a favorite of mine, and the lack of sound brought the quality of the flash down. I would tell you to work on story line, sound, and symbolism. Aside from that, good flash. 3/5
Nice
Hey FPS War is TOTALLY Unnecessary, The war did'nt even make a differece Even if the war never began. As far as i could the grammer was ok. It was readable not like "ZOMG11! Tahst WuS Da R0x0r!1! Man...
Very good
But this really really needs sound.
If you add sound, it'll be alot better.
That's really all it needs, though, as it is very good already.
3/5