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Reviews for "The Finality - Week 1"

we have a new and decent flash......

but we need some improvements, the title caved me in and then lock shock and horror I find a bunch of stickmen cartoons. Despite this, i have seen the whole thing, it sems our freind wants to rebel in the cartoon. Myadvise try to use higher quality images of stickmen, if you wantyourmovie to become better.

MercuryLime responds:

Heh, thanks, I wouldn't be doing stickmen but they're SO MUCH EASIER and faster to draw... I'll improve it next week though!

Good idea

Pretty good idea and i know about the fact that u only had 2 hours to do this but make your character like the one at the beggining and dont include soccer...(im not really a big fan of it)
but thats just me :-)

nice job

it would have been a 3 but its 6 with the preloader but for what i have to say just add some quality to it everything was great but the quality of the animation wasnt that great but yeah just a tiny bit better quality then its good.

has potential

The graphics and style caught my attention and were interesting, but they were just thrown together it seemed. The music/sound got annoying as it was a bit repetative. It seems like it could be pretty good if you put more time into it.

Wait for it to get better, then try submitting it.

Seriously, if you say you'll have more time later and later eps will be better, you could've waited and made this one better. Starting off on the wrong foot can give your series a bad rep. And seriously, your stick animation is pathetic. Sorry, mate.

MercuryLime responds:

But... see... If I waited to submit it I would forget what happened this week. This way, if I get any good suggestions I'll work on them, and I'll see how far I have to go to get some better ratings.