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Reviews for "Apartment 51 - Ep. 1"

Well drawn...

Well drawn, but I think it needs ome work. I really do like the premice, but I think the animation needs to be smoothed out a bit. It seemed like the writing started out pretty good & sort of petered out towards the end. I liked the bit with the badgers (LOL) and let's face it, there's just something funny about a chupacabra named Eduardo. The "fuck pandas" club was funny too; you've got some funny bits here, but I think maybe some ambient muzik under & some SFX would help; also it might help if you improved your audio quality: it sounds like you're sitting in your kitchen with a single mic... if you can, you might think about "sweetening" your audio by using some processing, either an EQ, or some prod/mixing software. You might want to get some additional people to do voices with you. I think you've got something here, but I think it could be so much better. Good luck & I hope to see more from you in the future. ZB.

It's Good

Loved the Metal Gear ref. The sound could use a bit of cleaning up and the storyline just a bit stronger ( the random events are cool, but they are few and far between.) But it is the first eppy, and as such, it is good. Look forward to seeing more.

Comical

'Fuck Panda's' an instant classic.

Pretty funny and good dialogue.

Good needs work though.

Good gags it has potential. All I'd say is work on the voice acting a bit it seemed kind of stale to me. Other than that good job!

A bit of more work...

You should do some more work on the animations, story included and on your humor... The idea is right but it really needs some more work to be done... ill give you 5/10 for efford...

SmokedBacon responds:

This review would have been helpful... 6 years ago when this was made. ;)