cool
this is awesome flash,very cool,nice graphic and sound nice work
Reviews for "innerlight: the storm"
Excellent absolutly excellent.
This simply draws you in. I absolutly loved it, and hope to see many, many more as good as this. Simply supurb.
Good stuff
Hey nice animation. you must have put a considerable amount of effort into it. I reckon it could have been better with actual voices... but it was still good. The music made it powerful aswell. Keep up the good work.
Three Cheers for Mediocrity!
Hooray? Not really. This movie may have excellent sound and occasional spurts of ... reasonably good graphics, but the animation still feels sluggish and a tad clunky. Here's an example of someone getting really good at doing something the not-quite-right way. Such as riding a bike backwards, or driving a stick shift without the clutch (After a while, I'm sure it's possible to learn how to not kill a transmission immediately). There's an integral component, very simple and obvious, that we JUST... CAN'T... SEE. It's right in front but I can't quite put my finger on what makes this movie feel sub-par.
...or maybe it's the plot. There was a lot to be desired there... But that seems like the LAST thing to complain about in a Flash movie! Yeesh. I gotta admit, though... It did seem somewhat overdone, yet at the same time the outcome was a bit underwhelming. You get a tremendous backstory from the villain's point of view--a lot more intimacy there--whereas the hero is a distant Adversary. Yes, Olatokuno, by making the the evil one the Protagonist (the leading role), you've garnered sympathy for him. I found myself rooting for 'the bad guy', in fact hoping that something different WOULD happen. That could've made it original. You didn't make it original. Therein must lie the failure.
At this point as I write the review, I realize that it could have been THAT as the missing component: You foreshadowed the bad guy making a difference and winning, but instead you painfully tweaked in the win for the superhero. The superhero himself seemed not very heroic at all, in fact (I thought he looked a little like Adam Sandler >_>) and his actual powers except turning blue aren't really defined at all. And a piece of a building bumping into the robot, and no emphasis on the superhero's 'strength' seems to hint that all of this is taking place in a world where structural integrity of all things is insanely low and (from dodging lasers) that the speed of light is NOT the top speed of reality. ... like the whole universe was dumbed down. Not a good feeling.
I wish I could tell you how to make this more fluid, more satisfying, and more distinct or pronounced, but that's the direction you'll need to work in, with all apologies for the suggestion's sad vagueness.
ART-TRON responds:
Yo the fact that you took that much time to analize means that it was worth an analysis. That alone means the world to me :)
I will keep sumbitting and I hope you will keep me on my toes and getting better.
Thanx for the review.
great movie
Wow. that was cool. almost as good as the decline of video gaming. i look forward to a sequel.
ART-TRON responds:
Thanx