hmm
you can compose music well, everything fits well into the song, but you should listen to the genre (in newgrounds or listen to pros) to pick up some of the effects and little things they use to make iot sound really good.
what im trying to say is that this song prolly looks great on paper, but you need to execute it better.
I understand what you mean by that.
But for this one, I'm just at a stand still, and don't know where to take it to make it sound good or even know where to start.
It's just a dud, lol, I have plenty of those. ;D
interesting, but has potential.
speed it up, bro. use a better, faster, more intense drumbeat, and add in some more drum n bass style to it. it'd sound awesome that way!! i really thing you should expand on this song cuz you can really go somewhere with it! btw, make it a bit less repetative with that theme, maybe add in something else to go with it you know?
Thanks for the insight!
I highly doubt I'm going to mess with this but if the though for tinkering with it does come around, I'll take your advice into consideration. ;)