Aww
You need to make more like that that reminds me of... my...friend...*cries*
Aww
You need to make more like that that reminds me of... my...friend...*cries*
awwwwwwwwwww.
That was really sweet.
not bad
Good job with the dramatic progression. There were, however, a few grammatical errors in the text. The music fit the story, and is effective at drawing the viewer. Most would have cried from the unexpectedly expected reunion at the end, it certainly follows form.
awww so cute
it made me cry a little bit
Aww
So sweet...made me cry.