Hmm....
Well, that definately was a good attempt at your first flash! You have the talent, I could see that! As you get better, you can start to add audio and dialologues so it is more realistic and doesen't distrupt the music you put in there....
Anyway dude you did better than me... LOL.... u should have seen MY first atemmpt at flash movies! LOL!!
Anyway, can't wait for the sequel.... Keep it up!