Needs work
I suggest redoing the whole thing so people can actually read the text to understand whats going on. Slow down the text, and test it out your self to see if even YOU can read it.
Reviews for "Bowzer : Episode 1"
Seph-Brunian responds:
I did you fool
I don't have lightspeed vision
Next time, why don't you try slowing the movie down so people can actually read the text and understand whatever story your telling. The only think I got was Bowser died and now he's back in Luigi's body. Since the speech bubbles pass in 0.00005 seconds, I know nothing else. The graphic and sound were decent but that won't save this nonsense of a story.
Seph-Brunian responds:
Don't exaggerate i didn't ever have less than 15 frames of text. But I see your point.
And it's not quit nonsense, it does make minimal sense.
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if only the subtitiles were there long enough so u can read them or the story had an cohesion at all, and seeing as u made that war up u should gives some decent background, great idea though it just needs a few adjustments and it will be a high rating movie without a doubt
Seph-Brunian responds:
War between Mushroom Kingdom and Bowser. Doesn't really need explaining.
it would have been good
i couldnt read any of the captions, i think i only finished 2 or 3. I think i might have liked it better if i knew what was goin on and what they were saying
Great!
I love the best sounds, and I will call it the best sprite movie ever!