Boo!
Ha! I'm a ghost which is funnier than that stupid flash.
Reviews for "-The clown-"
Apiman responds:
Oo... Thx for the review anyway - Api
Not enjoying it
The drawing style was poorly done but adding the shadows and such to it made it not look so poorly then it could have. The plot wasnt good and it looked like you just moved the clown an inch or so in the whole movie, it never really changed it pose. Plus the music didnt fit the whole school scene.
Apiman responds:
Thx, i knew that i would have some use to the shadows, thx for the review - Api
ummmm.......
that really made no scence to me at all. what was the point of the movie anyways. u should have made some of the stuff they did a little bit funnier. like pies in the face of something like that!!! needs more work!!!!!!
You need a point...
You also need a plan before starting to make the movie... Well a more detailed plan with a STORY or at least a point. If this was one of your first movies was this pretty good, keep up and you will pretty sure get good scores later on :D
Apiman responds:
I know, what happened was that i sat and draw some pictures and didnt have a plan, and then i just kept doing the movie, but thx for the rewiev :]
And btw, yeh, it was my fourth movie :]
- Api
i like it but.........
i think this could be alot more funnoer than it is i think you should add some movements to the clouds. and add some more demension to your characters (maybe a little shading or something) also i think you should have shown the clowns throwing something up at the end after they graduated you know to add the extra push towards your animation. and the claown should get a clown job at the end just so people know he acomplished his dream in becoming a clown. but other than that i loved the music and i think it was pretty funny. keep rocking!!!!
Apiman responds:
On my next movie i'll be planning a lot more. I put a lot of efford in the pictures but next time i'll put the same effort in the plan, thx for the review - Api