Aw...damn
I clicked 1 because the beginning was sort of slow and I was lagging really bad. So it just seemed like self gratification. Although I must admit, I would've 4ed you. Sorry man. Although I don't have the voting power to make or break this flash, sorry.
Good luck with your future projects
okie doke, thanks anyway
LOL i laugh my ass off
I liked the music alot
i amit that it was good
Lol thanks, it's always good to get a good comment like that.
Wow
It was actually not bad. Err it was bad but I think you can do better so go and make something else maybe. You show some potential and I really hope that you will continue to make more flash animations because they could be good.
Thanks, I can actually make good things but I get into a habit of rushing things which I should stop doing. I've started getting into the habit of making things detailed but I have loads of stories and stuff planned that I want to do and when i'm making them i always want to get them done so i can see the finished result. Meh.
very crude
you have shown that you have grasped the basics of the flash progaming, you have a good base. However, the problem lies with the presentation, your flash animation look rough round the edge, i saw a problem there. my advise to you, it to rfine your drawing skills a bit, then you will have quality like the famous artists on ng.
As for your plot, it made sense, but the ideas were unconnected, it needed links. You should have charcters relating to eachother, don't have too many charcters in a story and have each one ont be used throughly to tell a story, it wastes time.
Your sound, was awful, i fell you could have done better, it was grainy, and the voiceactors sounded lik they had layingitis. Show some improvement, when yo are recording sounds, make surre you have the mic at least 3-4 cm away form your mouth, you get quality of voice.
You can do better
Ok I just thought i'd let you know that I dont use flash I just use a program called swish which is ok but its very hard to do anything and make anything look good so that's why it looks crap and also what are you talking about? There were no voice actors in that movie
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weird, i did not undurstand a thing!