Why the low score?
I really don't understand why this is gaining such a low score. Looks like you've been hit by a few 0-bombers, really. And undeservedly so.
Anyway--this is a really well put-together piece. You've utilised the instruments well, I like the way the melodies combine together; it grows into a very mysterious and enchanting piece, and stays so until the end.
Really can't comprehend the low score it has garnered so far, I can find no fault in this. Very nicely done, you should be proud.