Pretty decent
~~REVIEW~~
ohmy this is a pleasent tune, now this was the type of style i was probably wanting to hear from you atleast once or twice, this is a more softer feel of your style and thats ok, i even like some of the backround effects and that was a nice touch making this abit more, then we go into some of the hard stuff, really neat stuff here on this piece, other then that it was alright, pretty good if you ask me, as for some improving, not so sure it was decent all the way around.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more focus on the softer touch here, the hard stuff is pretty good, but i did enjoy what you did with the softer touch, also thowing in more backround effects would be nice aswell.