not bad
The thing you need to work on is timing . For instance the clouds at the beginning flew by waay too fast. But on the other hand the sun coming up took forever. The graphics were pretty good . I dont actually understand at all what this flash ment. I enjoyed it but , it was obvious in some parts that you took salad fingers as inspiration and thats ok . But you failed to master firths jumpy moments and things like that . Still good job , hope to see more
first of all thank you for such a detailed review ... anyway the clouds were moving so fast due to the heavy winds ... and the sund was meant to build up suspense ... and also i didnt try to mold this around salad fingers but people seem to be getting that impresion ... but thank you for the review
Not bad
Im guessing its your first? Good quality for a first. You need to speed it up in places, just make it tighter and pick up some of the slack, there are bits in it that dont NEED to be. Very good for a first overall. I deem this PROTECT-WORTHY!
ill take that into consideration ... thank you ... but as to the things that dont need to be i wish you would have been more specific
hmmm
graphics could be better....i like its creepyness, but im guessing you drew it like this on purpose? oh well...it was decent....i expected a little better....clean your next ones up more....oh and i especially liked the random little glitch type things with the sound...very nice touch there...overall i give it a 6, decent but not bad
yeah ... im new to flash so im sure there are alot of things i could clean up with practice ... and also i drew it with a mouse >_< its a pain in the ass
damn good
its a damn good movie and it only makes it better that i helped with it
thanks for the ideas johnny haha
Realy good
You did a realy good job. I gave it a five.