Not bad
Not bad, but here are some things to work on:
First, stop sounding so damn full of yourself. You're not that cool, I'm sure.
Once you've humbled yourself, make the backgrounds more interesting.
Once you've made the background more interesting, make a game with a cooler characters, and a better plot.
This wasn't that bad of a game, but there are much better one's on Newgrounds right now... on the front page even. So get crackin'