Relaxing.
As much as I love all your previous work, Envy.. I must say.. Continue this one as it is. I agree with the guy somewhere below here, that at 0:42.. Gah, indescribable. Keep it as it is, and give a release date. Can't wait for you to finish this one. ^^
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You can't make this an electronic piece unless you take off the breaks.
I'd be happy if you'll turn this into a dance piece but I know you'll find it too difficult.
have to be longer
at 0:42 there was such a feeling of harmony in it
you have to make it longer and maybe with a great epic =)
My opinion is..
.. you should not "Envify" it, but continue it as it is now. Add some pads or strings, and this will really work out well.
Brilliant
It so relaxing, soothing, calming this is stunnning mthe intro and the melody of the song is amazing like this could be used in a movie i dunno if u should turn it into a dance song or envy-fi it as u say .. just wow i am blow away by this peice it too beautiful to turn it into upbeat dance :P i think u should keep it like classical and maybe add violins would be good
~Crakle~ 5/5 10/10