Man, i hate to give this song a point off...
Because it's so freaking good! But it does lack intensity at the end, and i noticed a bit of a lack of transition between the drum&bass and the ambient part. Also, i don't think the ending was quite so stellar to leave off in an ambient type music. It just trailed off.
9/10, 4/5, you're almost there, and again.... i hate to do it, i really do.
Great composition.
5/5 9/10
You did good on this song. The melodies were good, but now you should practice mastering so you can have your songs sound better. also I liked the Ambient piece at the end, but it ended too quickly IMO.
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Very well done.
I especially like the house part.
Mix of genres
I loved how you mixed different techno genres. I wasn't that big a fan of the "house" portion, but the drum and bass part was effin beautiful. I'd love to mix that into its own song if I only had musical talent and/or software.
nice
honestly, i thought this was going to turn out bad, the beginning sounded really basic and amateur-ish. but since i started listening to it more, and it progressed, the beats, the melody on top of it made it sound interesting. i like the house melody, it makes the whole thing alot better.
and the switching genres thing is a great idea.. usually i dont think it would be but somehow you made it possible.
but the only con in my opinion is the hardstyle. WAY too much bass. it gives me a headache trying to listen to that. but you had a great idea going for it.
keep the music on dude. i think this is a strong point in your artistic talent.