Take your own advice
And add some vocals!
Other than that, all the instruments went well together, but it would be nice if you brought out the guitar some more, and I would suggest putting it so that it won't mix in with the vocals.
Also, there's something about the intro I like, but can't quite point it out. Anyway, nice job.
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Let down by the guitar.
I really liked the beat, but that was what redeemed it thee most points. The guitar went downhill pretty much from the moment it came in. It was far too screechy, and, although on the last 2 tracks I said it was too quiet, but I think it was too loud this time.
The intro, before the guitar came in, was really nice and reminded me of Radiohead, but, as I said earlier, the guitar let it down.
I kinda like the outro too, it's quite original and interesting.
[Review Request Club]
When I add vocals I think I'll put the melody/solo guitar lower in the mix.
Thanks!