I liked it!
But I think it's too good to be a first flash... (suspicious looks...)
Anyways... I vote 4.
Reviews for "Naruto Vs. Sasuke"
SilverMega responds:
Thanks!And yes,this is my first flash.
Good for a first time
Considering that this is your first flash I'll be easy on you.
First I didn't like that you used music from Chrono Trigger. If you're doing a Naruto flash then you should use Naruto music.
As some others have been saying, the fighting gets monotonous as they keep donig much of the same actions over and over. Maybe it would have been better if you made the fight somewhat more epic. Have them move around, changing the scene and have them use their much more renowned jutsus like Rasengan and Chidori.
And the endings were just bizarre in my opinion. You have Naruto use kuchiyose no jutsu to do kage bunshin? And on top of that, AKs? And do you mean to tell me that Sasuke threw that shuriken clear around the world? I understand that you were trying to go for some comedy, but if you're going to do that for an anime then base the humor in the anime.
As I said earlier it's quite good for a first submission. Work on this flash a little more and you could have something really awesome.
4/5
SilverMega responds:
Thanks for the review!I might work on some of the stuff you pointed out.
good for a first
there are a lot of worse flash out there but it's a decent first try
SilverMega responds:
Doubt you could've made anything better :P
hey kinda cool
like i said kinda cool time for some constructive critisism alright the backround was kinda dull and boring you should have done it some where else like the pelimanary stage or something, the music was um sort of reptitive and the ending were funny but sort of irelivant [y didnt naruto use his inner demon or something?] well besides that it waas pretty decent cant wait to se more.
[remeber this is constructed critisism dont get mad and pull out an ak on me okay?]
Solid
This wasn't too bad for a first flash,the background looked great and the fight was good with it's solid pace and cool fighting moves also i loved the remix of the Chrono Trigger battle theme,overall you did a nice job on this and keep on getting better. =)