Reviews for PJ - Mournful Dreams (Updated)

[mikekay]

nice

dang jordan how long did this take you, its raw as hell

i thought of someone just sitting in a deserted city all alone, chillin

PoyzenJam responds:

i made it pretty quick, but i still got some stuff to work on in it.. thanks mikeyyy

[DamienVastare]

This is what it makes me think of

I am lost, forgotten, the soul of a once great man is now nothing more than a wanderer lost in the infinitesimal void between reality and madness. I continue to walk in hopes of seeing another being, but alas I am alone, the thought is both comforting and heartbreaking.

How is it that I am destined to wander the plains of oblivion? With nothing but my insanity to keep me sane, as I continue to travel with no sense of direction a figure forms in the fog, I run towards it, the feeling of relief fills me up, as I get closer the figure becomes more familiar, now he and I are face to face, my horror is equaled only by my despair, the figure is me.........

PoyzenJam responds:

awesome review, thanks for the deep words and thoughts

[Kausill]

I think of...

I think of a man with an umbrella walking under a dark, shadowy bridge in the late night, the streetlights creating a dim atmosphere; with the occasional bark of a dog. At 1:43 a woman comes along and the man and the woman start to talk under the strange bridge, and as the conversation get's deeper; the night and the rain begin to fade away, the sun begins to rise and create an amazing horizon; but the man and woman don't really notice, it get's deeper into the day, around midday and they leave, the rain keeps pouring... The rain keeps pouring, and the man is still there; alone.

PoyzenJam responds:

i can see this too. that would make a really cool music video actually. glad you liked it and thanks for the review :)

[CartoonTeakettle]

Pretty cool

Would be great in a game. If I knew how to make games, I would've used this song alot :P
Who knows? I might make a game some day.
I promise you, that if I ever make a game, I will put this song in it!

Since you asked for it, I'm gonna tell you what I think when I hear it.
Too bad I barely can't, I have no words that I can use to explain those feelings.

-CTeakettle-

PoyzenJam responds:

thanks man!
yeah that would be awesome
thanks for reviewing
really appreciate it

[xregnarpurex]

gives me chills man.

This is hell'a good. Damn do I like this...

PoyzenJam responds:

thanks
i made this a while ago so i was thinking of remaking a better version
i'll let you know when i do
but anyways, really glad you like it : )