Lol
Lol the kid on the bike was funny when he got hit... so was the guy doing yardwork.. it was pretty good overall but the sounds could have been better and you could have probably like... killed sombody with the rocks :P
Reviews for "Monster In The Mansion"
Not bad... in fact, I liked it!
It was a little hard to understand but unless their is some greater plot point that Im not aware of it was simply about a monster who thought he was created for no reason, and thought that his creator hated him but he realised that his creator truly did care about him.
I thought it was humorous but not necessarily because of the storyline. I like how the monster threw rocks at the man. And he sprayed the kid on the bike, and then later when the flower hit the man he was holding *those giant scissor things you use for trimming hedges, cant recall their name* and although you knew what came next it didnt show him stabbing the kid to death. lol Hope that makes sense.
Anyways, I gave it a 7. It was pretty cool, not one of my faves. Ive seen better and worse. I liked the artstyle, and you had some cool humor ideas. Id like to see some more of that humor in future flashes from you.
Hmmm, kind of boring
It wasn't bad at all but it was a little boring. I understand fully it wasn't ment to be funny or at least not LOL funny and I also udnerstand it wasn't ment to be action but it was a little slow. Maybe it's just me. But I'll try not to be bias. Good job anyway.
Needs better plot...
Plot needs more depth... it feels like a wading pool. Style is too much like Squigglevision technique, you really need to develop a better style... or find a better one to copy.
assholes.
many previous reviewers kept saying that 'this sucks' or 'it's gay', but really, they're just dickheads who hide behind the security of the cyberspace to make slamming comments like these. i bet they do not have the balls to go up to creator and say it to his face in real life.
could YOU make a decent one? sheesh
anyway, this flash is not too bad. but the message was not really impactful, adding more significant events might help. don't worry it's not gay.