Hmmm...
Why do I not get the feeling you worked really hard on this one? There are several reasons. I can start with the outlines, you can still see white lines at the end near the frames. Which means the size isn't really fitting. That can be arranged tho so I hope you change it.
Second, the animations somehow seemed a bit stiff. Like the water not moving, and the character not stopping to run when he stood perfectly still when he had ran down the stairs. Also when the soldiers shot the monsters ... hmm... the middle monsters head exploded frequently eaven witout the soldiers shooting at it.
The movie was all too short, it really didn't deliver anything as a follow up to the first movie. It should have had more substance. I also felt that you rushed through the movie, it felt very much like you were thrown around in the story. Suddenly they were there, then they ran over there ... Id really say it was rushed.
But what really was the worst thing with this movie, and I think a while bunch of people can agree - was the music. Duude! The music didn't fit in AT ALL!!! You have chosen hectic techno songs to a calm movie and it really gives me kind off a headache just watching this movie to that music. The last song ... I would recommend resubmitting this movie and fixing these things. The movie is a unsliced diamond basicly.
Well, there is nothing really WRONG with the overall story. But the text boxes were all too boring to read... They also were kinda clumsy sizewise and looked uncarefully placed. It would be more pleasant to read as a subtitle section down on the screen. Or if you could yourself push buttons to continue to the next speech bubble
I would also recommend a higher Frames Per Second value to the movie since the movements were a bit choppy.
I understand the hard work making a sprite movie. But it could have been oh so much better if it floated along better and the mistakes were fixed. Its not a bad movie, but I don't find it anything more than just OK. Vote: 2