Nice song!
This is actually a very good song! I won't get into production issues, as I consider that for the type of recording equipment used, it's already sounding good enough!
I love the piano and hammond in this! There is a rock 'n roll/punk feel to the entire song. It's, well, really alternative! And a flanger? What is it on? I can hear it in the guitar, but some times on the drums as well. Was it on the output (or just the effect the cassette added)? This is soooo late '70s! Even though I never like using the term, this is actually genuine as well as musically interesting!
Great work! 9/10 (for the sound quality) and 5/5 for a great piece!