The dialogue was messed up...............
Vegeta's dialogue is messed up because he was like polite when he met Piccolo. Normally he would say, "I'am the great Vegeta now tell where the dragonballs are Namek", or something like that. Also, Goku's Spirit Bomb was messed up, he doesn't say, "SPIRIT BOMB", he usually says, "Please lend me your energy", or something like that. Finally, the style of Vegeta's Big Bang Attack was lame. There was no exlosions, just a an orange blast. Hence the name, BIG BANG attack. But, I see you put effort into making this and it's your first time so I'll give you a 4/5. I'm sur you will get it next time................................