too much slomo
thats stuff would be alot better if it was faster and had sound affects. in places it was slomo just when he was walking or something. slomo is only good in crazy action parts. use it sparingly. there were some cheesy tweens in there too, like whn it zoomed into the camera the camera was smooth but the room was zooming like a slideshow. and shape tweens look crap if they are used badly. those are my criticisms. decent flash nonetheless.