i liked it alot
unlike the person before me i thought it was good i hated the music but the way you made it was awsome keep up the good work
Reviews for "Starcraft Homeworld remix"
Techno mix was better
This has goten my lowest rating ever on thing's I've reviewed. A 7. Sorry man the animations seemed like some were done last minute. Remember. You have all the time in the world. It's ok if you get a submission in a day or two later than expected as long as it's good. Compared with your techno mix flash this left much to be desired.
Anyways good job and hoping to see improvements on your next flash.
Just an idea:
You don't have to use all starcraft voices and all. If you can sound kinda like a marine or etc. you can try to make a story form. This is only an idea and you don't have to acept it but if you do try to make the voices good.
Thankies!
^.^
I love starcraft
This is a good starcraft-based thing... I definately like how the characters and vehicles were drawn, though the actual animation wasn't the same quality. Though I know it's a lot harder.
Another thing I kept thinking when watching it is it could be a lot more 'dramatic'. Such as that protoss just stands in front of the tank as it moves towards him and gets killed, but he could have tried to defend himself or roll out of the way before being crushed or blown up. Also afterwards his comrade leaps onto the tank and pokes it a bit with his energy blades and it randomly blows up, which looks sort of strange. Imagine you had him leap onto the top, and start tearing huge bits of metal off, smashes his way into the cockpit, and slices up the driver inside. All with cool camera angles and zooming in and stuff. That would be so much more exciting.
Also there isn't much of a coherent 'story' to this, but I suppose it's difficult when using quotes from the game.
But anyway, this was still well done. It'd be good to see more in the future.
LegolaSS responds:
yes, in my next one im going to focus more on fbf then good graphics, and mabey have some funny easter eggs hidden away
the animations
it would be great if you made a second version. just improve your animations. their arms are bearly moving and when that protos(?) dude is attacking them with the light sabre thing it looks really bad. so please make your characters moc flexable. and mabye an isometic view of the tank or something.
Very good drawings.
Now all you need to do is work on the animation. The music choice is excellent, and you did VERY well with your drawings. However, I was disappointed with the animation. The tank was just scrolling. It never moved its treads or anything. Work on your animation next time and I'm sure you will do excellently.