5
"created a human/robot thing..."? The visuals are okay, but the dialogue needs some work. Maybe a greater continuity in the overall story too.
Reviews for "Sypher Part 1"
You just passed my test, barely..
It needs some serious work. First off, learn proper grammer and how to spell aliens correctly. Next, too much of the movie was the intro, it lost my interest because it was too plain and original. You needed to show what was going on while the narrator ( or whatever it was ) spoke. Having just the slow few screen shots was too plain. You ruined this slighty by trying to add humor at your finishing cut scene. By saying "I'm too lazy to make a replay button" was ghastly. This was supposed to be a serious action flash I presume, not a stupid, pointless thing. Also, if there "might be" another episode, dont say "might be, or maybe..." Anyways thats all I have to say about your flash. Try to improve.
It's aliens not alleins
Not bad the intro needs some work but other than that not bad at all
Alright
With more work, it could become somewhat smoother, and can you for the love of god have the soldier person say attack or something...i mean...go just doesnt fit the part
Interesting and New.
It was interesting.
It needs better wording on the Intro though.
I little more work on the small fight scene in the end also.