Reviews for Life With John - Ep. 1

[Crymsonsplash]

Great!

After your previous "backyard fireworks" submission, I was excited to see this one. It certainly did not disappoint :D

[The-Gentleman]

Pretty damn well done.

I find this to be quite an awesome style and humorous entry.

The volume of some parts need a little work, but besides that, you get my five.

[The-Jewish-Duck]

Pretty amazing actually.

I'm usually tough on authors. This I can't find a bloody problem with and it makes me mad. Good job.