Constructive Critism
Your submission was noteworthy. The areas you need to work on is simply your artwork and areas of animation. There were times when your pictures seemed to overlap and look terrible (the talking silouettes leaps to mind), and some of them didn't synch with the music (The words didn't come up at the right time, don't show the keyboard with only one or two keys depressed every now and then, and don't simply have a hand going up and down on the bridge of a guitar without finger movement.) With regards to artwork, practice a little better at drawing; The plane, persons and planet seemed haphazardly sketched, and quick submissions don't do anybody any favors. Keep practicing.