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Reviews for "Blood, Bullets & Tears (Old)"

Nice job, but could use more variety in the piano

Funny, while I was listening to it I kept thinkin of this track I uploaded a long while ago (Under Control); it's got similar piano, but it's more hip hop than march. Anyways, I thought your track had a great sound, good selection of instruments, but it's also really repetitive on the piano riff (JUST LIKE MY OLD TRACK!). That arpeggio you have running the whole time gets old after about 2 minutes. My suggestion is to come up with a different way of padding the midsection of the track or maybe shortening it to about 2:30 - 3:00, if you feel like I do about it.

Still, I don't mean to be harsh here, it's well done, and it's well mastered. Nice Job. Also, it's not Hands-Up trance (which is starting to annoy me cuz there's just SO FREAKIN MUCH OF IT around here).

4/5

SFaPiL2 responds:

I did notice the repetitiveness and tried to mask it by alternating a similar melody and other piano riffs, but I guess it didn't work. Hmm... I'll try to come up with something new another day.

Thanks alot for the suggestions ^_^.

Beautiful

could be better, i can tell your new to ambient style because of the way its composed and the lack of good automation and electronic instruments in the song. this is probably more like classical than anything.

nevertheless not bad. i wish i could comeup with melodies like that. i can make a whole song in seconds after ive made a melody. its just finding that melody that baffles me xD.

SFaPiL2 responds:

Nah... an electronic sounding instrument would've ruined it, I think. However, you're right about the not-being-ambient bit. I guess I'll change the genre to classical then.

Thanks ^_^