Stop wasting time reading this title!
So anyway, congratulations on making fifth place on the top of all time. You must be really proud.
First of all, you have a idea here. Your melody is whimsical, the sound is unique and the song is fun to listen to. I love your attitude towards making music. It isn't something that you should be overworking yourself on. That will only make it harder if the song is a total fluke. This however, was pretty good. I have only noticed a few flaws that I will point out now.
So firstly your song gets kind of repetative. Try comin gup with more ideas for multiple melodies that just one. Then just transition them into each other. Also the ending is kind of dissapointing. You need to make it tie up some loose ends instead of just have it fade away. That makes it seem like your idea still goes on however, the song doesn't.
Other than that good job. I really can't think of anything else to mention. Keep up the good work. Peace,
PO
P.S You will be getting a download!