you can make flash my friend...
its not enough to make flash and be a good animator, one should be able to make a story that everyone wants to follow.
You also put the viewers in a mood in which they felt what the characters felt (i think the sound contributed), which is a gift.
The story was decent, like i said u made something almost everyone will follow along with, and it showed effort. I can see you didnt just whip this up, but used some time and passion to make this flash possible
Im going to go down the list:
1.)Graphics: Not much to say besides, great job. Youve done three flash pieces and you have a drawing ability that i personally would rank highly on my list. It ran smoothly, no problems, and the objects were placed well. Hats off for the boarders you used, brilliant, i would say. That gave it a touch that seemed to make it seem more story=like, combined with the music.
2.)Style: An original plot-line, thats for sure. As mentioned before in this review, the boarder was a style i havent seen before but made the flash that much better. At the same time i thought the movie moved a little slowly, unless you were going for that to keep viewers guessing and watching....then in that case you accomplished what you set out to do.
3.)Sound: The opra type music....not my favorite....however it fit perfectly with the piece. You transited the subtittles well so all reading levels can read without having to restart the movie, but they werent camping a tent on the screen and stayin there for ten minutes. The spanish wording, i thought, made the flash seem more professional. Good job in all the areas.
You sir, are a rising flash artist.
Good luck on future submissions.