Gotcha!
I was about ready to blam this for being so whiny, but I decided to watch the whole thing and I'm glad I did. Nice move at the end there.
Reviews for "Clara Adventures (redone)"
Ahaha.
I got a good hearty laugh out of this. Good work. Girls like that are annoying and I appreciate the bashing the stereotype.
Ha!
Nothing like a little excessive personal drama for a good joke! I never saw the original so I can't say anything about whether or not the sound improved though, but it wasn't too bad in this version. Keep it up.
I hated it, but it was good.
Ok, your animation was pretty good, and I could tell that you put a lot of hard work into it, and that you have pretty good flash skills. SO, I give you credit for that. On the other hand, I supremely disliked the content. Overall: 6, becuase I know your a good animator.
Good...? What the-!? These usually suck!
Graphics: Author attempts to bite off more than she can chew graphically, with arms that are way too long, legs that are a little too short, elbows and knees all over the place at slightly weird angles. Still, I'd rather see an attempt at something ambitious like this than more lifeless stick figures.
Style: More barely-pubescent stupid teenage drama than an episode of Dawson's Creek. Once I finished puking, I decided that high school angst and comdey probabaly appeal to some people, so the author's faithful execution of it should be rewarded, not punished.
Sound: Lackluster popular music plus annoying breathing into the microphone equals sub-par sound. At least it wasn't a guy pretending to be a girl by jacking with the pitch of his voice in GoldWave.
Violence: None.
Interactivity: Movie.
Humor: There was only one joke. For some reason, though, it tickled me.
Overall: I don't understand why I liked this. I usually hate pretentious 2 minute opening themes with 45 seconds of movie attached to them. I guess something about this one just rubbed me the right way. Maybe it was the fact that it actually had a plot and characterization in it, even if the characters and theme were kinda trite.
Suggestions: Check out some books on how to draw comic book characters. They'll tell you everything you need to know about relative arms, legs, and torso lengths. You're off to a great start, kid. I can't want to see what kind of movies you and your friends put out when you're in college. :)