Amazing, apart from one poor scene.
Once again just like with every episode within the second chapter it was amazing, the little twist right at the start was great to see as was the unexpected ending with the 'hands in pockets' competition, I didn't see that one coming at all, it seems a little odd, but it seemed fairly interesting and it's got me looking forward to finding out what happens next. I liked how you had the main part of the story(the fight between Xin and Oton) broken up into different little section while other events were carried out, it was also nice to see the background story to the school itself and you revealed that in a fairly interesting way, which was hard to do as it wasn't the most interesting of information to be revealing in a movie, but you managed to pull it off and again it worked really well. You managed to get the fight really interesting too, as you kept having it look like one person was going to win for sure and that the toehr stood no chance and you just kept swapping between which character looked like winning throughout, which made the fight scene really gripping and entertaining. There was just one problem with this and it was just one scene, it was the scene where you had Ralph set the guy with the white face's head on fire and you had him running around screaming, it just really wasn't funny at all, it seemed too over the top and fairly stupid and it just really let the movie down as it just broke away from the greatness of the rest of the movie. It didn't even make that much sense, why did his head get set on fire? There didn't seem to be anything happening that would have caused that to happen and it just didn't seem neccesary. Something I'm happy about though is the fact that all the voice-acting was fine and that there were no sound problems. Anyway, brilliant job, keep up the great work.
Peace Out, Afro Stud
5/5