good work
and not because i like System of down, but this is good work to be your first flash movie. and in the beginning try to make the lips moving with the text :)
Reviews for "Lost in Hollywood"
Not bad for your first video ...
... But i think you can progress, coz it's far to be perfect.
First, i'm a fan of SOAD, nethertheless the quality of the music is not as high as it can be, I know it's because of the "5mb"... You don't want this flash to reach 10 mb or something like that i guess ^^
Then, i really liked all the backgrounds, really beautiful ( there are no other words !), but the characters seem too... strange... It's just what i feel about it.
That's why i'll give a 7/10, which is not bad at all, but if there are some changes you can make your video being almost perfect.
You can make it :)
Nice
I gave you a 10 in violence and humor because there was exactly enough that was needed for it. I thought this was pretty good. The 10 in sound was because SOAD is awesome. Hmm... lets see, the graphics were pretty good, especially the backgrounds and stuff, and I liked that shadow guy and the way the peoples faces changed. Anyway, good work
good one
very nice movie. very good for a first animation too, you got some good flash skills. hope to see some more from you.
seems like a shame that this one didn't win an award.
oh well, good work either way.
3/5
'Twas good, but needs improving, like getting away that noise at the edge. You know the sound? Like a untuned TV. And were the pictures supposed to be that small?
I hjad to give you 3 because your sound really bought it down, down and down. This was also one of those flashes with "meaning" into them, and i really dislike thjem 'tis anothoer reason why its 3/5